How to write good - take note!

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That's good. I read it through once and only caught on when I got to Seven!

Never, never repeat the same word.

And remember, sentences must not start with and.

Can I just say in the hope that I do not upset or offend anyone as this is defently not my intention, that this Thread really sounds like it is coming from a retired Teacher which to me is brilliant. When my children were at school I could immediatley tell the Teachers that loved the job and wanted to Teach and the Teachers that did it purley as a job to get money.

I so respected and loved the Teachers that were passionate about Teaching and always wondered if they ever really knew what a difference they made to those childrens lives.

Well it is in Pedants' Corner - might be a clue?
(It was originally spotted in a bookshop window, however.)

But this is true is it not that there are some brilliant Teachers out there that make a massive difference to childrens lives

ps have not got a clue what p corner is sorry

Well it does what it says on the tin- provides a thread for Pedants