I w ont add to this for now but would just say Jangran’s line is in keeping with limerick style. Gemini’s sounds ok but is just an “ordinary” rhyme. As we have two threads entitled Limericks we could use one for rhyming verses and keep one for Limericks. The latter is a specific format as several people have pointed out before. Just an idea and I appreciate it’s just a game!
Kathleen O'Mailly had at last found her man And so a torrid relationship began It was doomed from the start He was sure to break her heart Oh poor Kathleen, chin up if you can
Kathleen O'Mailly had at last found her man And so a torrid relationship began It was doomed from the start He was sure to break her heart Because his love was his Afghan.