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popeye moves into highgate village (occaompanied by not just 1 olive oil )

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time2rhyme Mon 05-Dec-16 22:50:16

hi everyone. I am new to this forum. just hope my style of posting is not to OTT.

popeye moves into highgate village (occaompanied by not just 1 olive oil ) 04.12.16

sunday morning i did witness
but i am not calling crime stopper
rubbish poetry may be heinous
this perpetrator will come a cropper.
they may well be feeding
is it a hidden village lab
my forensic pale is privately leading
he's just down in crystals have a greasy kebab.
i will find and expose
you interrupted my sunday posting
H.M.P will door close
your bang up time will have no coasting.
how dare you be rude
on my poetry lane
down low is my mood
taking the evidence pic was pain.
all residents lets spoil
bang to right with no deny
i am sure i did just see olive oil
we defiantly need to stick together to bring down popeye.


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ninathenana Mon 05-Dec-16 23:07:40

confused

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fiorentina51 Mon 05-Dec-16 23:11:19

?

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f77ms Tue 06-Dec-16 03:51:10

WTF ?

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harrigran Tue 06-Dec-16 08:22:29

confused confused

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Rinouchka Tue 06-Dec-16 08:39:42

Has DH slipped something in my coffee??? hmm

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Cherrytree59 Tue 06-Dec-16 09:36:06

Hi time2thyme
Sorry its a bit early in the day
Can you elaborate further?
smile

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DaphneBroon Tue 06-Dec-16 09:53:29

Right.
More tonic next time

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DaphneBroon Tue 06-Dec-16 09:59:28

Glad you are defiant though.
confused

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Riverwalk Tue 06-Dec-16 10:10:40
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Popeye's lady friend is Olive Oyl .... defiantly!

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Charleygirl Tue 06-Dec-16 12:16:46

Riverwalk are you defiantly sure?!

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Elegran Tue 06-Dec-16 12:30:37

Why not submit your poem here www.familyfriendpoems.com/submit-poem/ where it will be by up to 10 visitors (their reviews can be seen online by everyone) then possibly published on their showcase page?

I am sure you will find their knowledgeable reviews interesting, and helpful for your future writing.

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Elegran Tue 06-Dec-16 12:32:38

I am sure we will ALL find the reviews interesting.

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ninathenana Tue 06-Dec-16 13:42:22

grin Elegran I certainly would.

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Elegran Wed 07-Dec-16 14:55:43

I had a reply all ready for T2R's other poem elsewhere, but before I could post it, that thread had been deleted! So I'll post it on here. Luckily I had saved it while typing.

DO send your effusion to the link I gave you the last time you posted, time2rhyme Someone there may even understand it and tell you that it is a masterpiece of angst-driven complaint against the emasculating effect of civilisation on the human savage and his God-given right to pee wherever he feels the urge.

It is wasted here. All of us have seen what you describe, and if we object, it is more to the smell and seediness of it than, as you hope, the sight of someone's little man being waved around behind a wheelie-bin.

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DaphneBroon Wed 07-Dec-16 15:28:22

Could not have put it better!
Someone was taking the "proverbial"!!

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Indinana Wed 07-Dec-16 15:54:27

No, not OTT at all. Just utterly impenetrable.

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kittylester Wed 07-Dec-16 17:01:41

I know I've been stressed lately but..........

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time2rhyme Thu 08-Dec-16 22:31:20

but I have made you feel a whole lot better kitty ? glad to be of assistance.

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DaphneBroon Thu 08-Dec-16 22:46:10

hmm
Probably not, on balance

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Jalima Thu 08-Dec-16 23:39:33

Really confused because I thought Popeye lived in Malta not Highgate
popeyemalta.com/

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kittylester Fri 09-Dec-16 07:15:32

Nope....don't feel better!

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